3:53AM: My first LOVE poem!!!

The Love of my life...a few hours away!!!

I never thought I’d do this

That I write for someone I love..

Always considered it an injustice to the emotion…

But I can’t help it tonight

In this hospital room…on a mattress 4 feet away from your embrace

I feel the meaning of love

I love you more than I could ever imagine…

Tonight… we sleep the last hours of our childhood…

We begin the journey of adulthood tomorrow…

You are the best companion…

And I could not wish for any other…

For in four hours you shall be a Mother!

25 Comments

  1. Comment by NeeliPeeli on December 19, 2008 4:46 am

    Congratulations Ali Noor and Mandana. May you be blessed with all the joys of parenthood and this precious life that you bring to this world.

  2. Comment by Mustafa on December 19, 2008 8:45 am

    man this is just gr8. awesome. .. congrats . .

  3. Comment by fatima ihsan on December 19, 2008 9:01 am

    awwwwwwwwwwwww this is precious!!!!! i am missing u guys!!!!!

  4. Comment by Zair Abbas on December 19, 2008 9:50 am

    Congratulations :)
    Sanjana Zehra – lovely name MashAllah
    God bless u n ur family!

  5. Comment by Abdul Rehman on December 19, 2008 12:01 pm

    Hi. Hope it went well. Congrts!!!

  6. Comment by Rockstar on December 19, 2008 2:17 pm

    congratulations brother =)

  7. Comment by madiha on December 19, 2008 2:30 pm

    AWW……….!
    so sweet……….!
    Congratulations on being a daddy ……….! :) Abba …!
    Snow white has actually arrived….!
    May Allah Bless you and your family….!
    love for the baby …Sanjana zehra ( snow white….! :) )

  8. Comment by themightybug on December 19, 2008 2:51 pm

    erm…. speechless :)

    Waise taubah. Here was me also thinking u’ll never write a direct straight love song and u explode with lines with such directness and emotion as this :) Quite amazing how you continue to surprise (and not to sound condescendig) and grow :) Heartiest congrats waise bro ! Welcome to adulthood and sleepless nights and multiple tensions and unimaginable joys.

  9. Comment by themightybug on December 19, 2008 2:52 pm

    Ooooh and much love to Mandy and S.

  10. Comment by fAr stAr on December 19, 2008 3:23 pm

    sweet!
    and best wishes to u and ur family :D

  11. Comment by ayesha yaqub on December 19, 2008 3:25 pm

    beautifulll ! :’)

  12. Comment by aIsHa on December 19, 2008 5:01 pm

    awwwww…..soooooo…..sweeetttttt

    CoNgRaTuLaTiOnS ALi NoOr BhAi!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ab aap ko pata chalay ga k aap ne apnay amma abba ko kitna tang kiya………

    wish u all the vry best…..may Allah bless u ur wife n ur angel with a vry HaPpY LifE ahead…..

    magar phir aap blog pe likhna kam kar dein gay….kyun k phir aap apnay angel ke saath waqt guzaray gain…….. [:(] kher koi nai……

  13. Comment by sameen on December 19, 2008 5:04 pm

    awww! congratulations to both you and mandana! Great poem by the way!

  14. Comment by alina on December 19, 2008 5:10 pm

    Congratulations to the new mom and dad!!!
    saw the baby’s picture she is so adorable…Mashallah…
    May she have a glorious life…
    Besides, Mandana truly is the best…
    love u guysss…
    muaaaaaaaaaaahhh…

  15. Comment by Ayesha Shiraz on December 19, 2008 8:52 pm

    Many many congratultions to both of you and of course amma abba as well….loads of love for the lil angel….We are really happy for u guyz……

  16. Comment by Adil Siddiq on December 19, 2008 9:43 pm

    lovely Noor :)
    Aap dono ko bohot bohot Mubaarak ho…
    Sanjana, beautiful :)

  17. Comment by bhoot on December 20, 2008 9:44 pm

    Sanjana
    gud name MashAllah.

  18. Comment by Shani on December 21, 2008 12:25 pm

    Congratulations

  19. Comment by bilz on December 22, 2008 10:58 pm

    congrats guys…..

  20. Comment by titlooo on December 23, 2008 2:13 am

    conngrrrattzzz…:)
    loads of kissezz n hugz fo da lil angel..hop she’z doin f9..:)

  21. Comment by supersizeme on December 23, 2008 9:09 pm

    MashAllah! Congratulations!

  22. Comment by Arsalan on December 28, 2008 9:09 am

    Its so beautiful .

  23. Comment by Faiz on January 12, 2009 5:18 pm

    conngrrrattzzz 4 the cute little girl and about the poem i would say that THE POEM IS AMAZING DUDE :)

  24. Comment by habibur on January 16, 2009 2:10 am

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  25. Comment by Dee on February 26, 2009 9:53 pm

    Awww, congrats… thats such a sweet poem! May you have a long future with your beloved family. :D

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